These favorite writing revision strategies come from not only what I’ve learned in the english classroom and also what I’ve learned from my science classes around how to design an experiment. I like just writing what pops into my head at that moment. One thing I’ve learned over the years is that the first take at something is usually the best; no matter how rough it is. I also try to relate to whatever it is I’m writing, I feel…
My goal for this paper is quite simple. I want to convey what I believe to be the definition of true beauty and what exactly that encompasses. The steps I plan to take to achieve this is by making sure my own story is included in the larger one. Readers can relate better when the writer gets personal. I also want to include examples of things society deems important as that is what the reader is most likely going to…
Ideas that I have regarding the incorporation of other media into my final essay include spatial, auroral, and visual. I want to structure my essay at certain points to look different. That includes making sentences their own line to help define a point or just have different spacing options throughout the essay. I want to make it look unique and help more easily convey what I’m trying to say. In regard to auroral, I want to add either a movie…
Armstrong says something very interesting here about beauty and experience. What he says exactly is, “To regard beauty as a luxury adornment or a social signifier was to miss the true potential of the experience.” There’s a lot going on in here and it’s pretty fascinating stuff. From my point of view, beauty is anything that has meaning and that I, as a human, can relate back to. I feel that society views beauty as more of a superficial subject…
